Okay I wrote this song, and I need ppl's opinons on it. Please be honest cause' I can take the heat and please don't copy it ....
Okay it's called "Path ( Of Love or Dismay)" by me of course
I don't know/ I'm just so confused/ I don't know what to think/ I don't know what to say/ I'm just lost in a troubled path/ of love or dismay/ I hope my heart's just playing a game/ with my brain/ I hope it's not for real/ just only a phase/ I don't know who I am anymore/ or who to trust/ and even who to love/I'm just so confused/ I don't know what to think/ I don't know what to say/ Cause' I'm just lost in a troubled path/ of love or dismay/ maybe I'm making this up/ or maybe it's dream/ that's becoming a horrible nightmare/ I just don't know anymore/ I don't know who I am/ or what to live for/ I don't know who to trust/ and even who to love/ I'm just so confused/ I don't know what to think/ I don't know what to say/ I'm just lost in this horrible/ beautiful path/ of love or dismay
Sooo... that's it. Comment please and don't be afraid to be honest cause' I can take it.
If you want to know more songs email me at iluvrockmusic97@yahoo.com
Thanks, I luv all you guys
I mean theres a sense in it and stuff, but for me its too many short sentences, when i write i always try to have long sentences to connect the lines, BUT with the right music this could be a good song! try to have longer and more complex sentences, thats in my opinion what makes a song more catchy and interesting, you have to listen more carfuly you know? :D
I'd need to hear it to.
awesome
The lyrics are a little cliche and by a little I mean really, but lyrics are ultimately unimportant I'd need to hear it to judge.
nice!
it depends on the rhythm. but the lyrics are good.
It's ok.
Depends on the music.
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