ok, so i told people im not posting anymore poems on because im on holiday and needed a break...
so today i like just sitting there, and something came to me so i wrote it on a piece of paper....
but then i got writers block and couldnt carry on anymore...... and i think i shouldnt post this since i promised myself that i would relax and not give myself headaches writing during these holidays, but didnt really happen that way...... anyways im over not posting.... soo
back to the point, i have writers block, so can someone help me carry on from where i left this off, feel free to point out anything bad.... :D HELP!!
ok so here goes, and by the way there are some paramore related lyrics in here :D
So this is the end
We cant pretend
Say it and i'll leave
It isnt fair to lie
Tell me the truth
It will set you free
Do you want me to stay or leave?
You have already broken my heart
so why do you still keep on ripping it apart
You need to let me go
I t was always a possibility
right from the beginning
That this wouldnt work
our relationship is broken
It isnt the dream we had anymore
ok so thats how far ive got, i'm thinking of naming it broken relationship.... i need help, just carry on from where i left off..... any ideas??
anyways...... comment
haha, thanx :D yeh lotsa paramore influence :P haha
i love it! it's pretty good, i can totally Paramore influence on those verses, i think you should call it broken :D
name it my broken heart since that's the main point... awesome
ok
haha. well all i can say is i was listening to BNE while writing, no wonder.... hahah :D
it is really good-i can see the paramore influence!
i hate writers block-it really sucks-but the rest will fall in to place soon! it always does somehow!lol!
thanks... i think i might delete this soon, and then post the full version in a few weeks :D
it's really good so far!
=) x