hi im new here so i wanted to post this, Its a song I've been writing about strruggling to find out who I am...
its not finished but do yall like it so far? yes or no?
Alive
started it out all wrong
To be in a place where I don’t belong…belong
I stayed in my own world, since it’s the safest place I know
And if I let anyone in
Then where am I to hide
looking for sunshine on a cloudy day
running through a maze with no escape
Things will never be the same….. never be the same and
Why do things have to change
Cant we just take it back when it all made sense
I just want to feel alive
My thoughts are trapping me in a cave and I feel so breathless
Cant you see that I am Fighting for the rights of my own mind
to get the strength I need to survive this madness called life
Woow,that´s really good! :) I write songs too and I´m a bit nervous if somebody like it ...but I´m afraid.I don´t wanna post it here,somebody can stole it :O
I liked it=) Good job =]
its good =)
It's great xD
It's not my song guys, but thank you anyways!
and eww!
:)
yeah without a tune cant really feel the emotion or mood..good though
pretty good!!!! I wish I could hear the tune!!!
mmmk.?
pretty good
AWESOME :)
LOL sorry, but its really good, i love it!! and plus everyone likes it so your welcome!
yes I am, I will text you when I get out of class...meet me by the union!
Thats awesome, i love to be able to write songs like that.
This sounds good. thumbs up ^.^
shoot...i should've thought of that first!! i really suck at song writing and poetry. this IS good. i like it.
dylan be nice... :P haha.... ok third time looking at this... its awsomes, better than mine..... i suck at rhyming and lyrics.... but i love yours.... i keep on liking these lyrics more everytime i come and check it out....
i like it so much!!! it sounds like a Paramore song really!!! hehe i am so exciting in listening ur lyrics with some kinda melody :)
THIS IS GOOD. I LIKE.
Nice?
niccccceee
I love it!
like i said before..... really cooools
also @YAY4PARAMORE posters??? like the things you put on the walls.... im confused......
Very good, better than other posters!
thats pretty damn amazing :)
yes :P
Thats really good when I read it I got all warma nd tingley inside :p tehe.
wow thats really good. the lyrics are really deep=)
its grrrreeeaaat!!
sounds gooooood
you should post onyoutube though :P
I'll watch (:
x
yes..post in youtube a.s.a.p. it's great..
yes yes yes yes yes yes yes :)
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