ok, so in my english class we did metaphore poems,where u compare yourself with another thing,and i came up with fire so please read and tell me what you think!!!please keep an open mind and be brutally honest

TALLY-HO!!!!     XD

I AM FIRE 

Let my heat warm you

On those cold winter nights

And I got your back

On those days the power goes out and you’re frightened

Let me give you light in your times of

darkness

And at campfires you may sing around me

with your six string

There’s not much to me, just a calm

center, comforting and glowing peacefully

On the outside I rage.
My flames reaching for the next thing, ready to spread
If my flames touch you, you can melt, burn

or take them on and use them for your own good…it’s your choice
It may start off as little but my flames grow

quickly if they aren’t handled with care
When things go wrong my flames destroy

every thing in my path
And die out only when I choose I am done
Powerful but don’t perceive me wrong
Try not to upset me for

negativity is like my water and dampens my spirit
Once my flame is out, it takes a while to

spark back up
Love me, hate me, I don’t really care, you

 might not even remember anything I may have said

Just remember one thing, I won’t ever

change
But until next time my friend, as like my

greeting to you,
I am fire