Here's a new one. It's not great but I was bored. I just finished it. Tell me what you guys think of the finished piece. P.S. don't worry the song's not about me.
Let Go
She stands there on the edge of the cliff
Not sure what she's gonna do yet
She stares down at the water
And thinks about all the things she's scene
She's so mature for her age
There's no way she could be fifteen
But there's so much she's put up with those years
That there's no way she can act like a child
(Chorus)
She's done with everything she's had
Oh she's finally giving up
And the water's like a welcoming to her
She stares at the waves and she smiles
There's so many choices she never had
There's so much she never got to do
But that doesn't bother her now
There's only one more goal she has
The wind blows in her hair
and she closes her eyes
as she takes a step towards the edge
oh she's finally decided what she's gonna do
oh she's finally letting go
(Chorus)
She's done with everything she's had
Oh she's finally giving up
And the water's like a welcoming to her
She stares at the waves and she smiles
She's on the edge
She looks up to the sky
And she lets out her good bye
Oh she's ready to let go
she's ready to let go
So she jumps
let go
let go
let go
let go
let go
let go
she finally let go...
amazing *-*
wow I love it! the idea behind it :) so good
@Eoin haha yeah that works!
@Ghost
I cant wright lyrics i'm a guitar player i wright the songs and leave the lyrics up to the singer. ;P
A simple solution to a minor problem. ^_^
@Eoin I understand what you are saying about needing a tune. Sometimes I feel that way too.
I need a tune but the lyrics are nice. ^_^
Thanks!
Wow! The song is awesome.
soooo good. you have a real talent!
Thankyou! I really appreciate it!
this is actually amazing! you're super talented. :)
Yay I finally got a tune for it!
Thankyou!
its really gd and i really like it u hav loads of talent!! No lie
That's fantastic! You've seriously got some talent!
@paramore rox haha I never thought of it that way, but I guess the lyrics could work there.
That's beautiful! Reminds me of Bella cliff diving.
@thelost yeah I'm glad I finished it too. There are tons of songs that I have started and never finished.
@misguided ghost> thanks, you should slot it in ur song somewhere :) just kidding..
well done u ended it...and her by the looks of things !
That sounds like New moon mixed with speak
@the carly set I can't wait to see how your version sounds!
beeee-yooooo-teeee-fulllll. please let me know if i can take it :)
Thanks guys! :D
you bust out more lyrics than er... a big book of songs lol and they're all great :)
yeah, its a good album.
amazing song... love it :)
Wow, you shud try singing ur songs and putting em on youtube or something! I love the lyrics :)
@Spock_Wentz haha is it really? I didn't even know! :)
That's so cool!!!!
:D
Oh, the name of the song is the name of an Avril Lavigne album!!!
xD
@thelostankh that's beautiful.
Her dreams rose and crashed like the waves
There no more saves for the life shes slaved
As her hair flutters in the mist and wind
She can finally erase the reality shes left behind.
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