Here is a song that I wrote a while ago. It was inspired by the idea behind the title of brand new eyes, obviously. Let me know what you guys think! Thanks!
I never thought I'd, I'd feel alive
Convinced myself I, well I'd died inside
Pretending life was just a game
Every day was exactly the same
A new mind and I'll find
A way to clear up all the ties
A reason to feel comfortable
In these brand new eyes
I feel so new, so brand new
Oh, waking up
So new, so brand new
Oh, we're waking up now
I've learned to hide from any pain
I had so much to lose, but so much to gain
Running away from the lie I've made
Falling behind, now, in this parade
Oh a new day, blow away
The dust on my disguise
No time for turning back, now
In these brand new eyes
I feel so new, so brand new
Oh, waking up
So new, so brand new
Oh, we're waking up now
I swear, breathe in
Oh we don't care
I swear, breathe in
Oh, we don't care
I swear
No more heavy heads
As we start to realize
There are no more heavy hearts
In these brand new eyes
Thanks!
@lovewentdown2nite Ok I'll email you!
really awesome :D
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Thanks so much everyone!!
Blog segment? What's your blog about?
It would be a dream come true if someone from the band saw this. I bet they could write a good tune for it. I'm not very good at that part :/ . When I wrote it, I accidentally put it to the melody of For a Pessimist, I'm Pretty Optimistic somewhat. But, obviously, I want to put it to its own catchy tune.
What we need is for Hayley and the band to look at this. Really.
It looks good, but I can't seem to think of how the tune will go (But that's just me). Perhaps with Hayley singing it and with the guys playing the tune with instruments I might be able to get a good grasp of what this is about, if you, uh, see what I mean.
But, that said, it look great :D
I have to say, this is really effing good. You are talented.
:) two thumbs up!
DUDE THIS IS AMAZING!
wow, i really like it, the lyrics are amazing
i LIKE IT!!!
;)
Beautiful! OMG COPYRIGHT IT AND GET IT PUBLISHED!
WOULD YOU LIKE A SEGMENT ON MY BLOG!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS!
Thanks everyone :)
@GillY I can sing decently I guess. I'm 15. Thanks :)
It's very good :)
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caN yoU sIng gooD??
yoUr reaLLy taLenTed, iM jeaLous hahAh.
woW hOw oLd r yoU??
love it!!!
I love it, it has a spicy edge to it thats the type of thing brand new eyes is about, great song writing keep it up :)
Thanks :)
love it!!
:o) very nice. i like it a lot!