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MY song brand new eyes please read and comment !

  • MY song brand new eyes please read and comment !
    bwilde for PARAMORE ! says(Oct 4, 2009)
    Edited on March 30, 2012

    ok i wrote this song the other day , when i was feeeling reaallly positive after watching the paramore delux edition dvd, i loved how they explained the meaning behind brand new eyes... idk i guess it inspired me ... if this is totally lame u can tell me ... i just want some oppinions

    BRAND NEW EYES

    i build my world up so high

    just to watch it fall

    show me the way to perfection

    or is there a way at all ?

     

    i need to find a new perspective

    beacuse there has to be a different side of life,

    there has to be more than heartbreak  and grief

     

     

    im lookin at life with brand new eyes

    im goin through life with nothing but blue skys

    open my eyes to happiness , open my heart to love

    beacuse i want to have brand new eyes

     

    i wanna see the good and the bad , the happy and the sad

    i wanna kno what love is

    instead of the walls i build to keep people away

     

    show me the way , beacuse im ready for change

     

    im gonna look at you with brand new eyes

    your gonna see through my disguise

    shoow me that everything you say is not a lie

    you opened my eyes to the world

    i see everything ive been missing

    beacuse i have brand new eyes ........

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bwilde for PARAMORE's picture
on October 4, 2009 - 8:08am

ok i wrote this song the other day , when i was feeeling reaallly positive after watching the paramore delux edition dvd, i loved how they explained the meaning behind brand new eyes... idk i guess it inspired me ... if this is totally lame u can tell me ... i just want some oppinions

BRAND NEW EYES

i build my world up so high

just to watch it fall

show me the way to perfection

or is there a way at all ?

 

i need to find a new perspective

beacuse there has to be a different side of life,

there has to be more than heartbreak  and grief

 

 

im lookin at life with brand new eyes

im goin through life with nothing but blue skys

open my eyes to happiness , open my heart to love

beacuse i want to have brand new eyes

 

i wanna see the good and the bad , the happy and the sad

i wanna kno what love is

instead of the walls i build to keep people away

 

show me the way , beacuse im ready for change

 

im gonna look at you with brand new eyes

your gonna see through my disguise

shoow me that everything you say is not a lie

you opened my eyes to the world

i see everything ive been missing

beacuse i have brand new eyes ........

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paramoremizbiz101's picture

BY THE WAY! I THINK U ARE GREAT!

paramoremizbiz101's picture

I LOVE IT! IS GREAT! U SHOULD RLY MAKE A SONG! NO LIE! AND PLEASE COMMENT MY PROFILE! AND TELL MORE PPL 2 COMMENT IT!

bwilde for PARAMORE's picture

yes weee should lol !

Pixie_18's picture

aww, very nice. i love it!
haha yeah we lyrical people should band together.

claire.xo's picture

.very nice.^^

bwilde for PARAMORE's picture

lol thank u

paramore_rocker's picture

PURE AWESUMNESS!

bwilde for PARAMORE's picture

=)

bwilde for PARAMORE's picture

thank u !

paramore101_16's picture

i love it

ParaChick-13531's picture

thats good, u should join with the other lyrical people on this site, ur all so talented :)

paralover_12's picture

i lovee ett!!!!

Maho_2's picture

awesome

Carly is fixed at zero's picture

aw thanks Sergio XD

-_5's picture

That is fantastical.

(I've always liked that word.)

NiKKi_34's picture

THATS RADiCAL!

Ripping Wings_2's picture

That is extremely good!

SergioPlaza's picture

wow, it's really good Carly. Good job

Carly is fixed at zero's picture

hey man, i wrote some chords and a melody. it's pretty simple. i'll record it when i can. i had to switch around some lyrics, sorry, but it's mostly intact.

bwilde for PARAMORE's picture

thank u ! , i really wish someone could do sumthin with it and post it on youtube , beacuse i dont play any instruments myself , and it would be reallly cool to see someone do sumthing with my song !

Courtz The Treble Girl's picture

It is a really pretty song. I reckon it would sound cool acappella or maybe a heavy bass line?

ToxicPink's picture

it's lovely!! i adore it. congrats!

bwilde for PARAMORE's picture

=)

holarebecca.'s picture

quite good lovey :)

bwilde for PARAMORE's picture

ahah thank u !

Ignorance3199's picture

that's great!

xjule's picture

thats an awesome song.!

bwilde for PARAMORE's picture

thsnk u !

bwilde for PARAMORE's picture

hmmm yeh ....u can use it if u let me hear it when ur done !!!!!! lol , and ill post it on youtube , and post the link when its finished

Pinoyboy2829's picture

woooow thats very awesome!!!! it totally defines the meaning of Brand new Eyes =)

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