ok i wrote this song the other day , when i was feeeling reaallly positive after watching the paramore delux edition dvd, i loved how they explained the meaning behind brand new eyes... idk i guess it inspired me ... if this is totally lame u can tell me ... i just want some oppinions
BRAND NEW EYES
i build my world up so high
just to watch it fall
show me the way to perfection
or is there a way at all ?
i need to find a new perspective
beacuse there has to be a different side of life,
there has to be more than heartbreak and grief
im lookin at life with brand new eyes
im goin through life with nothing but blue skys
open my eyes to happiness , open my heart to love
beacuse i want to have brand new eyes
i wanna see the good and the bad , the happy and the sad
i wanna kno what love is
instead of the walls i build to keep people away
show me the way , beacuse im ready for change
im gonna look at you with brand new eyes
your gonna see through my disguise
shoow me that everything you say is not a lie
you opened my eyes to the world
i see everything ive been missing
beacuse i have brand new eyes ........
BY THE WAY! I THINK U ARE GREAT!
I LOVE IT! IS GREAT! U SHOULD RLY MAKE A SONG! NO LIE! AND PLEASE COMMENT MY PROFILE! AND TELL MORE PPL 2 COMMENT IT!
yes weee should lol !
aww, very nice. i love it!
haha yeah we lyrical people should band together.
.very nice.^^
lol thank u
PURE AWESUMNESS!
=)
thank u !
i love it
thats good, u should join with the other lyrical people on this site, ur all so talented :)
i lovee ett!!!!
awesome
aw thanks Sergio XD
That is fantastical.
(I've always liked that word.)
THATS RADiCAL!
That is extremely good!
wow, it's really good Carly. Good job
hey man, i wrote some chords and a melody. it's pretty simple. i'll record it when i can. i had to switch around some lyrics, sorry, but it's mostly intact.
thank u ! , i really wish someone could do sumthin with it and post it on youtube , beacuse i dont play any instruments myself , and it would be reallly cool to see someone do sumthing with my song !
It is a really pretty song. I reckon it would sound cool acappella or maybe a heavy bass line?
it's lovely!! i adore it. congrats!
=)
quite good lovey :)
ahah thank u !
that's great!
thats an awesome song.!
thsnk u !
hmmm yeh ....u can use it if u let me hear it when ur done !!!!!! lol , and ill post it on youtube , and post the link when its finished
woooow thats very awesome!!!! it totally defines the meaning of Brand new Eyes =)
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