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Okay, I have no clue if I'll get hated for this but This is a song I wrote

  • Okay, I have no clue if I'll get hated for this but This is a song I wrote
    DeathByPencil<3 says(Jul 22, 2011)
    Edited on March 30, 2012

     

    I'm screaming

    I'm falling

    Can't seem to right these wrongs

    You broke me down

    You smashed my crown

    I can't take this

    This breakage is

    The only thing

    That’s keeping me alive

    (You can't decide what's wrong or right)

    Still you can't seem to

    Change my mind no

     

    Chorus

    Nice try

    You lost your mind

    You're on the edge

    Blame yourself oh

    Goodnight

    My dear don't cry

    You're on the edge

    Once twice more whoa!

    You can't put this on me this time

    (I'm screaming oh I'm falling)

    You can't put one on me this time

    You're on the edge whoa!

     

    Verse 2

    I'm changing

    Re-arranging

    I'm not that same young girl

    You pushed me up

    You pulled me down

    I can't do this

    Metamorphosis

    It's now whats keeping me alive

    (You lost me yeah confused me)

    Still you keep on trying to

    Change my mind oh!

     

    Chorus

     

    You need a better plan

    I'm not your bitch don't think you can

    Control me

    You don't know me!

    I'm screaming falling once again

    On the plus I've got you to join me

    On the edge please

     

    Nice try

    You lost your mind

    You're on the edge

    Don't blame me no

     

    Chorus x2

     

    On the edge woah!

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DeathByPencil3's picture
on July 22, 2011 - 11:23am

 

I'm screaming

I'm falling

Can't seem to right these wrongs

You broke me down

You smashed my crown

I can't take this

This breakage is

The only thing

That’s keeping me alive

(You can't decide what's wrong or right)

Still you can't seem to

Change my mind no

 

Chorus

Nice try

You lost your mind

You're on the edge

Blame yourself oh

Goodnight

My dear don't cry

You're on the edge

Once twice more whoa!

You can't put this on me this time

(I'm screaming oh I'm falling)

You can't put one on me this time

You're on the edge whoa!

 

Verse 2

I'm changing

Re-arranging

I'm not that same young girl

You pushed me up

You pulled me down

I can't do this

Metamorphosis

It's now whats keeping me alive

(You lost me yeah confused me)

Still you keep on trying to

Change my mind oh!

 

Chorus

 

You need a better plan

I'm not your bitch don't think you can

Control me

You don't know me!

I'm screaming falling once again

On the plus I've got you to join me

On the edge please

 

Nice try

You lost your mind

You're on the edge

Don't blame me no

 

Chorus x2

 

On the edge woah!

kazumi's picture

it's a cool song!!!! ^___^

DeathByPencil3's picture

@ParamoreGivesMeWings Thanks :D I hope to sing this in front of a crowd too! Just need a band o. o

@PK Rock...pop anyones me

Kevin Kaizer's picture

is this a ROCK song or pop?
What genre?

ParamoreGivesMeWings's picture

Nice Feminist Anthem haha. I hope you get to sing this in front of a huge crowd one day. :)

allweknowisRIOT_2's picture

ok pop is all meaningless crap about staying up all nite at parties and getting drunk and is completely useless. music like this however, has meaning and i think its great!

Misguided-Ghost's picture

That si awsome :d and agree with u wen u say pop can be annoying- a lot of pop songs are usually about dancing and stayin up all night and stuff nd have no meaning... this however rocks!
xxx

The Moster&#039;s Daughter's picture

i like the song alot. It relates to how a lot of people feel in that kind of situation. Love the song, keep it up :)

no one&#039;s home's picture

ok first let me say oh my gosh thats awesome! i can totally relate to that i love it! hey how would u feel about helping me write a song for my band?

Decoding Me's picture

I really love this one and the meaning of it..i've been through people doing that to me so yeah i can relate to it XD

DeathByPencil3's picture

@Decoding Thanks, :D

@Nicci Um sure :D feel free, ill see if i can find a way to tell you the tune :D

LilCCRebel's picture

hey again thanks for the song but i love this one to. do you want it if not i will tell the recorder that you were the composer and stuff like that.

DeathByPencil3's picture

@smile Thanks :D

smiley_5's picture

It's really good. I like it :)

DeathByPencil3's picture

@Herson
Thanks ^^

DeathByPencil3's picture

@PK
Definately rock!!! pop is okay, but it annoys me sometimes ^^''

Kevin Kaizer's picture

@ParaFreaky

What kind of tune?

a pop? or Rock? xD

Herson Madrid's picture

Not bad.

DeathByPencil3's picture

um actually its like, you know how you know someone and that someone controls you but then you grow up and they discover you can't be easily controlled anymore? well its like that

YelyahSandy's picture

I'm changing
Re-arranging

did you mean,

my world is changing,
I'm re-arranging.
Does that mean Christmas changes too?

Other than that, it's alright.

DeathByPencil3's picture

um I already have a tune for this but if you'd like to go ahead ^^

Kevin Kaizer's picture

WOW! so awesome!

can i steal this?? :P

I'll make a rhythm for this.. :D

DeathByPencil3's picture

:D

Toxic X_X's picture

Np ;D

DeathByPencil3's picture

thankyou

hayley&#039;s truck's picture

I like it.

DeathByPencil3's picture

Thanks and yeah, that was a typo

Toxic X_X's picture

Cool song xD

But at Verse 2, it should've been "I can't do this" instead of "I can't this this"? :P

DeathByPencil3's picture

sorry about the swear word!!!