Okay guys… I wrote this song and I wanna know what you think of it (be as critical as you want, I wouldn’t be mad, promise) so please read and comment! xD
The fire burns this world we once knew
As the water washes it all away
Together we sit and stare
Into the darkness and dismay
Chorus {Eyes like blue poison
The poison that rushes through my veins
Lights up the darkness with some hope
Even when this world ends
You’ll still be living}
The fire’s getting hotter
And the waves are getting higher
But you’ll telling me it will be alright
My heart’s beating faster
As the last tide comes in
{Eyes like blue poison
The poison that rushes through my veins
Lights up the darkness with some hope
Even when this world ends
You’ll still be living
Eyes like blue poison
The poison that rushes through my veins
Lights up the darkness with some hope
Even when this world ends
You’ll still be living}
When this world ends we’ll watch together
Until that last tide comes in
Thats an amazing song
whoaaa. :) love the "blue poison" bit. i picture this with lots of distorted guitars and heavy bass...a capella at the end!
no problem
Thanks