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A song I wrote

  • A song I wrote
    Punk Rock Princess Abbey says(Apr 25, 2010)
    Edited on March 30, 2012

         Okay guys… I wrote this song and I wanna know what you think of it (be as critical as you want, I wouldn’t be mad, promise)   so please read and comment! xD                                 

    The fire burns this world we once knew

     As the water washes it all away

    Together we sit and stare

    Into the darkness and dismay

    Chorus {Eyes like blue poison

    The poison that rushes through my veins

    Lights up the darkness with some hope

    Even when this world ends

    You’ll still be living}

    The fire’s getting hotter

    And the waves are getting higher

    But you’ll telling me it will be alright

    My heart’s beating faster

    As the last tide comes in

    {Eyes like blue poison

    The poison that rushes through my veins

    Lights up the darkness with some hope

    Even when this world ends

    You’ll still be living

    Eyes like blue poison

    The poison that rushes through my veins

    Lights up the darkness with some hope

    Even when this world ends

    You’ll still be living}

     

    When this world ends we’ll watch together

    Until that last tide comes in

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Punk Rock Princess Abbey's picture
on April 25, 2010 - 5:55pm

     Okay guys… I wrote this song and I wanna know what you think of it (be as critical as you want, I wouldn’t be mad, promise)   so please read and comment! xD                                 

The fire burns this world we once knew

 As the water washes it all away

Together we sit and stare

Into the darkness and dismay

Chorus {Eyes like blue poison

The poison that rushes through my veins

Lights up the darkness with some hope

Even when this world ends

You’ll still be living}

The fire’s getting hotter

And the waves are getting higher

But you’ll telling me it will be alright

My heart’s beating faster

As the last tide comes in

{Eyes like blue poison

The poison that rushes through my veins

Lights up the darkness with some hope

Even when this world ends

You’ll still be living

Eyes like blue poison

The poison that rushes through my veins

Lights up the darkness with some hope

Even when this world ends

You’ll still be living}

 

When this world ends we’ll watch together

Until that last tide comes in

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Musicislife4evr's picture

Thats an amazing song

Carly is fixed at zero's picture

whoaaa. :) love the "blue poison" bit. i picture this with lots of distorted guitars and heavy bass...a capella at the end!

Musicislife4evr's picture

no problem

Punk Rock Princess Abbey's picture

Thanks