Hello everyone, i made a website dedicated to Paramore and i was hoping if you have the time is just to take a look at it and leave a comment on the guestbook page telling me what you think, is there anything you would like to see be improved and so on. But no offensive comments please.
http://www.wix.com/lizzieandjasmine/paramoreappreciationsociety#!
Autoplay is an absolute no. How can anyone take your site seriously if within the first seconds of visiting, they're blasted by obnoxious noise they were most likely not intending to have blast into their eardrums? It made me automatically click out.
http://www.createblog.com/myspace-layouts/36096-she-lives-in-a-world-of-...
Just incase you think I have no idea what I'm talking about.
I made that ^
Yes, it's for a myspace layout but that was all the rage at the time.
@The world is a renegade
To start with:
The colours are basic and childlike
The background image has no original editing to it
The white and the orange background where it says "Paramore appreciation" etc has very little contrast.
The link to the Paramore appreciate society is in an awkward place, the background colour doesn't match or fit the rest of the site
The music player is likely to cause someone an epileptic fit. There's no need for it to be so exciting when the rest of the site is so plain.
The grammar in the info box on the right is poor and doesn't have an adequate enough description of the site
the background is poorly position. You can barely see the band due to the video player
The video player doesn't need to be so large on such a small section of the page
The "paramore forever" bit is just floating and is pretty pointless. What does it signify? The white background isn't necessary.
The boxes are too sharp looking. Some rounding would probably have helped a bit
The only bit I can say I like is the placement of the navigation. The roll over colour is absurdly random as that green isn't found anywhere else on the image making it a pointless addition.
That's just the front page. If you like I could go onto the links and continue but I fear that it'd be too harsh.
The site has blatantly been made by a generator. Yes, it's a good generator and flash does make it look a bit shinier than the average generator but it's still incredibly amateur.
I applaud you for your attempt but the outcome was pretty poor.
Sorry but you asked for criticism.
@Tascha
My first website was much better designed.
It took me a long while to learn to do it.
I can type out CSS and HTML sheets by memory.
But I shall give a list of some of what's wrong in the next comment.
That's your opinions guys, I wasn't expecting everyone to like it. But instead of giving me insults, why don't you do something better and tell me how to improve my website. Just not insult it, so stop hating and cut me some slack it's also my first website. So don't have such high standards, and thank you to the people who like it. I appreciate your comments
@Matt This is her first site, okay? She still has to figure out how to do it. And why is the flash intro thingy that bad?
No, coming from someone who has designed website layouts for about 3 and a half years, it is not great at all.
To be honest, it's not that great.
Goodness, not another waste of space.
I'm on it.
It's called Paramore dot net
dude your site rocks
check it out
www.wiz.com/jamieaubrey/help-stop animal
i am making a web site that will end animal abuse
It's really cool
im making my own website now!!
i love it!!!!!!!!
awsome
that was so good!!!! i wish i could make a website like that. im so jealous
I loved your site! HAYLEY posted a comment on it!!!
So have 10,0000 other Para-fanatics.
but
You are doing something positive with your spare time. Thats a good thing.
Have fun
It's ridiculously mediocre considering you even tried to use flash.
Fail.